still a work in progress
The very beginning was weird. I wasn't expecting to be injured by just running up to a rock, and could barely see the bullets right after it, let alone the helicopter, so the toughest part of this intro was at the very start! I wouldn't put that at the very beginning, and would add a sound like a "yip!" when he gets injured. It also needs a way to restart after the game over screen without refreshing the browser. Then focus on making the game play feel smooth and the mechanics and collisions and stuff seem natural. I somehow get the feeling that I would like it more if the camera were zoomed out a bit so to speak; if everything were a bit smaller and you could see more of the area. A minor point, but the transition between levels was very fast, which I kind of liked actually, but maybe add just a brief caption at the top of the screen saying "Level 2" or something to make it a little less disconcerting.